There’s a small but important fix right out of the gate: the name you’re using—“Jenny Gutter”—doesn’t match any well-known actress with that profile. You’re almost certainly referring to Jenny Agutter, a respected British film and television star known for projects like The Railway Children and An American Werewolf in London. Getting that right matters if you want credibility.
Beyond that, your script has a clear strength: it frames style and confidence as an extension of identity, not just appearance. That’s a solid angle. But parts of it drift into generic, slightly exaggerated “viral buzz” language, and the focus on lingerie-style imagery doesn’t quite align with how Agutter is typically perceived publicly—she’s more associated with elegance, longevity, and craft than fashion shock value.
If you tighten the tone and ground it in who she actually is, the piece becomes much stronger and more believable.
